Incredible, and beautiful. Exceptional!!!
This is clearly a very personal track you have made here, so with that in mind I took a long listen to the feel of the track, and judged it on its relevance as an outlet rather than a production standpoint. With that said, the volume has a few little inconsistencies with the overall mix, but thats just knit-picking.
It's fast paced, raw and very energetic. I love the arpeggio synths, and the fx usage. But the claps sound a little out of paced, which add just a bit too much old school to what was actually a very modern track. These tiny issues have lost you half-a-score, but I honestly feel that you are on the verge of a five-star masterpeice here with the arrangement.
Go back and have a look at the mix, take out the mis-matched aspects (Like the cheesy 1,2,3 count) and build a base onto what I feel is probably the STRONGEST synth arrangement I have heard on Newgrounds.
This is definitely one of my favourite tracks from your others, and I scored you a 4.5 based on its mind-blowing pace and scope. The raw emotional message is very clear.
Keep uploading, and thank you for sharing this with us. Big love,
Thanks for your Review, it was very helpful. Im happy to see you can point me in a right direction and give me some helpful advice.
Thanks again :)
I totally dug this. I really liked the dynamic, and the atmospheric builds. I thought that the composition was perfect, but there wasn't quite that PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE drop that the song teased was coming. The back samples were incredibly well thought out, and the fx were used in a very subtle expansion to the track, rather than become its focal point.
I scored you 4.5 / 5, but I have a feeling that your next track is most definitely going to be a 5. ;-)
Really neat, very tidy and awesomely accurate. I love the build and everything is mixed really well. The drums (Which is odd, as mine were too loud!) are just a tiny little bit flat, but not so much as to take anything away from the song.
Nice work man! Checking out more of your stuff.
I've been trying to get more pop out of the snare, I like where my kick drum sits, but that pesky snare gets me every time.
Don't go too far back into my music! You'll find scary old stuff!
Thanks so much! :)
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